帮忙修改申请博士学位的英文咨询信

帮忙修改申请博士学位的英文咨询信

Dear Sir/Madam,不用or

Thank you for your precious time for reading this email.(首先感谢人家看你的信，比较礼貌) . I am currently a graduate student studying in xxx University(最好要表明学校）majored in Sociology. With a plan for further education and study in this field(研究生就要强调教育和研究的深入，比学位好一些），and great respect for your university(对你门学校很敬仰，不用写名字），I am very interested in the PhD program in Sosiology. However, I am not very familiar with the application process of a PhD candidate. Would you please help me to clarify the following questions?

1. Is there any PhD candidate intakes next year?
2. Where can I find the relavent information of the school website?

Thank you very much for your time and patient again.

Sincerely,
Jack xx(为表示郑重，请加上你的姓）

另外给楼主些建议：
一般录取程序学校网站上面都有，如果你发邮件去问教授，人家可能会怀疑你的英语能力，建议你自己找

作研究生自然要和研究有关，你应该问下教授的研究方向，并简单说下自己的研究方向

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