帮我看看有没有语法错误 ，谢谢

-we are only paying attention to grammar and memorizing words , --

 what they say

paying--pay,     memorizing--memorize,    i was so---so do i,   i at Grand 9---i am in Grand 9  , to give our calss----give our lessons,   mostly放在understand后面，  从i‘am afraid开始这句话最好改成：i’m worried about my own spoken ability,so i want to exercise it,   most what them say---most he says,   that---which

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At school ，we only pay attention to grammars and memorizing words . not many people like this boring subject . neither do I.  But when I was at Grade 9 ,one day ,an American teacher came to give our class , we were very surprised, at that time my english in class was not bad, but in that lesson I mostly didn't understand .I'm afraid ,so I want to exercise own spoken language, I hope I can  understand more what they say ，that is my english goal。It is very simple,I know.

paying 应该是pay

I was so应该是So do I

But when I at Grade 9把at改为was in

an American teacher to give our class 中把to去掉give用过去时态gave

one day 后面应该用过去时态 你讲述的是过去发生的事情对么？

如果是这样的话后面现在时态都要改为过去时

at that time my english in class is not bad,这句话的顺序最好改变一下

at that time my english  is not bad in class ,

so I want to exercise own spoken language在own前加my

what them say 把them改为they

大概是这样，你再改改看看吧

    At school ，we(加are） only paying attention to grammar and memorizing（改为memory） words , （加All)not  people like this boring subject . (加so）I was .  But when I （加was）at Grade 9 ,one day ,an American teacher  give（改为was given） our class , we are（改为were） very surprised, at that time my english in class is（改为was） not bad, but in that lesson I mostly didn't understand .I'm afraid that,so I want to exercise own spoken language, I hope I can  understand most what them say ，that is my english goal。It is very simple,I know.

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