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My Family
This is my family.There are four people in my family.My grandmother,my father,my mother and me.
My grandmother has short white hair.She looks very nice.My father has short black hair and small eyes.He looks very fat,so I often call him “fat man”.He works at a factory.My mother works at a L.D.T.My mother has long black hair.She likes sports and traveling,so I often go on sports with my mother.My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.
love each person in my family.I love my sweet warm home.
家人
这是我的家.有4人在家里.奶奶、爸爸、妈妈和我.
奶奶短白发.她看起来很漂亮.爸爸小眼睛,短黑发.他看起来很肥,所以我常常称呼他为肥人.他在一家工厂工作.妈妈在工程船名妈妈早已黑发.喜欢运动和旅游,所以经常去体育与妈妈.我的家人总是做一切对我有利的事.他们总是站在我这边.
我喜欢我的每一个家庭成员,我喜欢这个温暖的家.
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My family
There are 5 members in my family,my father,mother,elder brother,elder sister and me.My brother and sister were married,my brother has a 4 years old daughter.We moved to Shanghai when i was 3 years old,my parents are running business in a company until now.My father is a little bit childish,he feel that nothing is important than children happy,so he always satisfy to what we want since we were small.my mother take much care to this family,i used to feel than my mother is annoying,but now i understand what my mom did was for our own good.My brother is cuteand very tolerate,my sister is a strong-determination women,we fought everyday when we were small,but our relationship is close.
I feel happy to have such family.