How gladly i am to hear from you and to know you are getting

How gladly i am to hear from you and to know you are getting on good with your chinese study at BeiJing University.On order to learn a foreign language,one should not only study the language,and also study the everyday life of the native speakers.Since you had been in China for only half a year,i do not think you have known many about our life.Why not to spend the holiday with my families?my parents are looking forward to see you soon.If you accept our invitation,please phone to us.We will surely meet you at station.Best wishes!
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How (gladly改成glad) I am to hear from you and to know you are getting on (good改成well) with your Chinese study at BeiJing University.(On改成In) order to learn a foreign language,one should not only study the language,(and改成but) also study the everyday life of the native speakers.Since you (had改成have) been in China for only half a year,I do not think you have known (many改成much) about our life.Why not (去掉to) spend the holiday with my (families改成family)?My parents are looking forward to (see改成seeing) you soon.If you accept our invitation,please phone (去掉to) us.We will surely meet you at (加入the) station.Best wishes!
1.形容词glad放在am后面做表语,感叹句时提前,副词gladly不能做表语；
2.副词well修饰动词短语get on做状语；
3.固定短语in order to do sth,意思是“为了...”；
4.固定短语not only...but also...,意思是“不仅/不但...,而且...”；
5.动作截止到现在为止,用现在完成时：have done sth,而had done sth为过去完成时；
6.表示程度用much,而many修饰可数名词复数；
7.固定句型：Why not do sth?,意思是“为什么不...”,why not后面加不带to的不定式即动词原形；
8.family表示“家庭/家人”时为整体概念,一般只用单数形式,除非是指“不止一个的家庭”；
9.固定短语look forward to doing sth,意思是“渴望/盼望做某事”,to为介词,其后加名词或动名词形式；
10.phone sb = call sb,意思是“给某人打电话”,其中的phone为及物动词,直接加宾语us即可；
11.特指双方都知道的“车站”,则名词station前面加上定冠词the
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