这是我的英语演讲稿，麻烦大家帮忙看看，提提意见与建议

Good afternoon，everyone！Happiness is considered very important in our life.So,today，I’m going to talk to you about happiness.

HAPPINESS is a feeling that lights up your eyes, makes your steps light and makes you want to sing for no reason.

When you are happy, the world feels like a better place. As the saying goes: When you smile, the world smiles with you; when you cry, you cry alone. Wearing a smile will make you more charming and help you to win lots of friends. A good mood always gives you hope, which makes trouble and problems easier to handle.

In my opinion, happiness is rooted in optimistic attitude. In our daily life, we should face a lot of problems, which may lead to setbacks.The only way is right attitude and sparing no effort to overcome it then you can find happiness.

All in all, happiness is very important to our life.Life is full of ups and downs.Face our life with smile,and we will be a happy man.

整体感觉不错

再提一点建议吧：

1.在第一句后面加一句as we all know ,这样感觉有顺承，连贯一些

2.I’m going to talk to you about happiness.这句有些生硬，没有礼貌。可改为I want share my feeling about happiness with you.

3.The only way is right attitude and sparing no effort to overcome it then you can find happiness.这句话建议改为the best way