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高三学生学习任务繁重。体育课已成为他们难得的放松时间,可目前你校体育课内容单一, 有时甚至被占用。请你用英语写一篇短文, 给校报投稿, 谈谈你对此现象的看法,并提出一些合理的建议。

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高三学生学习任务繁重。体育课已成为他们难得的放松时间,可目前你校体育课内容单一, 有时甚至被占用。请你用英语写一篇短文, 给校报投稿, 谈谈你对此现象的看法,并提出一些合理的建议。
注意:1. 词数120左右;
2. 文中需要包含提示内容,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear editor,
As the college entrance examination is drawing near, we senior high school students are occupied with busy work.



Yours Sincerely
Li HuaAs the college entrance examination is drawing near, we senior high school students are occupied with busy work. To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.
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(答案→)As the college entrance examination is drawing near, we senior high school students are occupied with busy work. To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects. 解析:这是半开放性作文,给出了一个话题,关于体育课内容单一, 有时甚至被占用的问题,并有部分的文字提示。要求谈谈你对此现象的看法,并提出一些合理的建议。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】所给范文的一大亮点是句式多变: To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. 这句话用了不定式做目的状语,However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.这句话用了it做形式主语, Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality. 这句话用了倒装句, Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. 这句话用了同位语从句,Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句。
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