初一学生英语小作文

就是搞什么家庭介绍，我是这样写的...竟然错啦？
（题目左图三个女的，右图两个男的）

My grandfather and my father are in the right pohoto.My grandmother and my mother and i are in the another photo,we are very happ.这种的小作文也全扣分？我不相信啊.......

My grandfather and my father are in the right of photo.My grandmother and my mother and I are in the another of photo,we are very happy.

photo不是pohoto; My grandmother、my mother and i 不用2个and， in another photo 不用the, happy不是happ

every young student like fashionale things,such as popular songs and dances. they are energetic,like many different things,and curious at everythings in the world.they have plenty of ideas which is different from adults. but i think we should lay more emphasis on study. it is very important to study hard at school. it will help a lot when you grows up. and you will not feel regretful when you become old. of course, we can spend some time playing,doing something you like to , but we 'd better plan it very well, i believe this can help you study more hard.