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在这个暑假我去了上海，在进世博园的前一天我来到了金茂大厦，我们来到了金茂大厦的顶楼，并与姚明的球衣照了张相，也和成龙的蜡像照了相，顶楼有许多的望远镜，可以让我们一览上海的美丽景象，到了夜晚我们可以看上海的夜景，也是十分美丽的，我还看见了我们的中国馆，我十分喜爱这里！

In the summer, I went to Shanghai, in the day I came into the government the jinmao tower, we came to the top, and jinmao tower with yao Ming jersey a picture, and Jackie are photophed wax, attic has many telescope, can let the beautiful scene in Shanghai, at night we can see Shanghai at night, is very beautiful, I also saw our ZhongGuoGuan, I very love here!

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This summer I went to Shanghai. The day before entering the World Expo park, I came to the Jin Mao Tower. We got to the top of the Jin Mao Tower, took photos with Yao Ming's polo shirt and Jackie Chan's wax statue. There are many telescopes at the top. So we could take a view of Shanghai's beautiful scenes. In the evening we could also see Shanghai's nightscapes. They are also very beautiful. I also went to our Chinese pavilion. I love here very much!