英语短文改错题啊

将下篇短文改错 错误处有10处(可能不到10处) 每处错误只限1词 When I heared the news the famous singer Emil will come to People Theater to give a performance,I ordered five tickets immediately. Finally the day came I was looking forward to it. We went there on bus with excitement because we could hear him singing face by face. All the song lovers present got exciting the moment he was appeared. Suddenly all the people began to sing with him with the music. The concert was great success. After we returned home, we kept talking about it so that we couldn't fall sleeping.

When I heared（heard） the news (that) the famous singer Emil will (would) come to People Theater to give a performance,I ordered (booked) five tickets immediately. Finally the day came(came the day) I was looking forward to it (去掉it). We went there on (by) bus with(in) excitement because we could hear him singing face by (to) face. All the song lovers (All the fans) present got exciting (excited) the moment he was (去掉was) appeared. Suddenly all the people began to sing with him with (to) the music. The concert was (a) great success. After we returned home, we kept talking about it so that we couldn't fall sleeping (asleep).

第一句中will改为would

The concert was great success改为The concert was a great success

后面的so that要分出来，

其他的我就不知道了

1第二段的will 改为 would 2 第三段的on 改为by 3第五段的第二个with 改为along

4在第五段的great 前加 a ……

When I heard the news that the famous singer Emil would come to People Theater to give a performance,I ordered five tickets immediately. Finally the day I was looking forward to came. We went there by bus with excite because we could hear him singing face by face. All the song lovers present got exciting the moment he appeared. Suddenly all the people began to sing with him with the music. The concert was a great success. After returning home, we kept talking about it that we couldn't fall asleep.