假如你是第二中学的一名初三学生刘红，你要写一封信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend，告诉他你遇到的问题，并请求帮助。请根据下列表格中所列的信息，写完这封信。 姓名刘红星座 爱

假如你是第二中学的一名初三学生刘红，你要写一封信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend，告诉他你遇到的问题，并请求帮助。请根据下列表格中所列的信息，写完这封信。
姓 名
刘 红
星座 爱好
Gemini, (curious, outgoing) 听音乐，看动作片，偶像是成龙
最喜爱的颜色
green (energetic, new life), orange (joy, success)

存在问题
父母管得很紧，几乎不给时间玩； 迷恋上网聊天，经常晚回家，不能准时交作业；学习成绩越来越差，父母要求你放弃上网，为此很苦恼。
注意：
1. 词数90词左右。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
2. 信中须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑。
Dear Sigmund Friend,
My name is Liu Hong. I’m a Grade 9 student in No. 2 Middle School. I am curious and outgoing,my star is Gemini. My favourite hobbies are listening to music and watching action movies. My idol is Jacky Chen. I like green and orange best because green stands for energetic and new life and orange for joy and success.
But now I need your help. My parents are so strict with me that I have no time to play. I am crazy about chatting on internet,so I often go home late,，in that case I can’t hand in my homework on time. Because my scores become worse and worse ,my parents ask me to give up surf on the internet.I am very upset. Please give me some advice.







Can you give me some useful advice? I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Liu Hong Dear Sigmund Friend,

(答案→)Dear Sigmund Friend, 解析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者先写自己的个人情况，包括所在学校、星座、性格、爱好，然后写自己的烦恼，最后请求帮助。全文主要用一般现在时态。【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如listen to ，stands for，be strict with,be crazy about,on the internet，in that case， hand in， on time，worse and worse，give up，surf net，等短语，文中还用到了状语从句because green stands for energetic and new life and orange for joy and success.My parents are so strict with me that I have no time to play.so I often go home late,in that case I can’t hand in my homework on time. Because my scores become worse and worse.文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

这个问题我还想问问老师呢