谁有my summer holiday 这种作文,长一点,

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In the morning,I woke up.I saw the sun raising.The sunshine is beautiful.The trees were green.They woke up,too.I went to the balcony.There were winds.I sat on the sofa.I thought:Who made the world?
Then I went to Xiang fan.I walked on the street.I went to a post office to send a letter to France.I was too tired to walk.
At 3:00PM.I went to the Tong Zhi Sheng Piano Shop.I played the erhu there .At 4;30PM.I was sleeping.
In the evening at 7;30.My first perfromance began.But I waited again and again.
Oh,my perfromance was over .I went home.
Today was beautiful.
But that is a dream.
可不可以?不然你修改一下.