Emissions trading system is a market-based mechanisms of env

Emissions trading system is a market-based mechanisms of environmental economic policies.Article on the emissions trading system,the origin,characteristics and advantages of the analysis,evaluation shows that emissions trading system is to solve a problem of environmental pollution effective measures.Of emissions trading system in China is facing at this stage the relevant legislation has not yet sound and the lack of accurate monitoring of emissions trading,the sewage volume is difficult to determine the initial distribution of a fair and market imperfections and other issues.Address these issues put forward specific measures and measures.

Emissions trading system is a market-based mechanisms of environmental economic policies
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Article on the emissions trading system,the origin,characteristics and advantages of the analysis,evaluation shows that emissions trading system is to solve a改为the problem of environmental pollution effective measures.
句子也不通 to solve a problem of environmental pollution effective measures.
去解决一个环境污染效率的方法的问题
可改为
to solve the problem of environmental protection towards pollution.
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Of emissions trading system in China is facing(谓语1) at this stage the relevant legislation has not yet sound(谓语2) and the lack of accurate monitoring of emissions trading,
句子有两个谓语
Of emissions trading system in China is facing at this stage
facing 什么?
后面没有 宾语
the relevant legislation has not yet sound
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Of emissions trading system in China is facing at this stage the relevant legislation has not yet sound
这段最好改掉
of 去掉 at this stage 是 状语,可至后至前,但不做宾语
the relevant legislation has not yet sound
这句话的 sound 没有表达清楚.
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Address these issues put forward specific measures and measures.
address 是起草的意思 就换成 draft
measures and measures.换掉