请帮我检查语法错误,请帮我检查一下语法错误.IntroductionThe UGG Australia company

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请帮我检查一下语法错误.
Introduction
The UGG Australia company began in 1978,a young surfer who is Brain Smith from Australia,he took a trip to United States with a bag of full sheepskin boots.By 1995 when Deckers Outdoors Corporation,whose corporate office located in Golate registered UGG Australia,until 1998 the product line had grown,moreover the UGG Australia had status as in the world’s finest luxury foot brands.The purpose of this article is to demonstrate the UGG Australia how to take cultural identity in manufactory.I will focus on two aspects of cultural identity which are geography and biology to discuss the UGG Australia Company.
Conclusion
In conclusion,I have stated conception of cultural identity and connect two of the components of cultural identity to explain UGG Australia Company how to manage the company,finally,it is proved that cultural identity is significant in the business,it is deeply impact how to distribute and promote its product to consumers.

The UGG Australia company began in 1978,a young surfer （who is） Brain Smith from Australia,（he） took a trip to United States with a bag of full sheepskin boots.
这一句出现主语重复.把括弧中的内容去掉.
后面的内容,结构看起来也是好别扭⋯⋯