求英语高手帮改下篇英语作文！悬赏！

Translate the following letter into English. 亲爱的玛丽: 非常感谢您邀请我参加4月10日的晚会.我多么希望能来,但是我那天必须参加一个重要的会议.在这种情况下我恐怕来不了.盼望以后能参加您们的活动. 祝万事如意！ 爱丽丝




答案：Dear Mary, Thank you very much for inviting me for the party on 10th April. I would very much love to come, but I have to attend an important meeting on that day. It was very kind of you to ask me, but I am afraid that under the circumstances I will not be able to come. I am looking forward to taking part in your future activities. Best wishes, Alice

Dear Mary,

Thank you very much for inviting me to the party on April.10th I would very much like to come, but I will have to attend an important meeting on that day. It was very kind of you to invite me, but I am afraid that in that case I will not be able to come. I am looking forward to taking part in your activities in the future . Best wishes,

Alice

Dear Mary,

Thank you very much for inviting me to the party on April.10th I would very much like to come, but I will have to attend an important meeting on that day. It was very kind of you to invite me, but I am afraid that under the circumstances I will not be able to come. I am looking forward to taking part in your activities in the future . Best wishes,

Alice

第一行的for应该改成to

4月10日的表达方式直接写数字4.10就行，英语的话就 April 10.

“我多么希望能来”：I wish I could come

第二行的“that day”前不用加介词on了

“在这种情况下我恐怕来不了”：Under that circumstance,I'm afraid I can't come.

Dear Mary,

Thank you very much for inviting me to the party on 10th April. I would like to come, but I have to attend an important meeting on that day.I am afraid that I can not come under the circumstances. I am looking forward to taking part in your activities in the future. Best wishes.

yours Alice

Dear Mary,

Thanks a lot for inviting me to come to the evening party on April10. I would love to come, but I have to attend an important meeting on that day,so I'm afraid that I can't come.Anyhow, I hope I can take part in your activities in the future. Best wishes,

Alice