求高手帮我修改英语作文的错误

求高手帮我修改英语作文的错误
Our hometown is Laohekou.我们的家乡是老河口It is near the Hanjiang River.它在汉江旁边 It is very clean and beautiful.它很美丽和干净Its nick name is small Hankou.它的绰号是小汉口Hanjiang RIver is very cold and clean.汉江很凉和清We can see many fish swim in the river.我们能看见很多鱼在河里 In the evening,many peaple dance at Zhongshan park.在晚上,很多人在中山公园跳舞 Yujinxincheng is the higtest build in Laohekou.玉锦新城是老河口最高的楼 Laohekou has Baihuashan Mountain,Lihuahu Lake and Erpishan Mountain.老河口有百花山,梨花湖和二皮山 They are beautiful.他们很美 there are Daxiantao peaches,Hanshuili Peers in Laohekou.大仙桃和汉水梨产自老河口 they are tasty.他们很美味 Laohekou is our hometown.老河口是我们的家乡 I love Laohekou very much.我非常爱老河口以中文为准

Our hometown is Laohekou.我们的家乡是老河口.
It is near the Hanjiang River.它在汉江旁边
It is very clean and beautiful.它很美丽和干净
Its nick name is small Hankou.它的绰号是小汉口
Hanjiang River is very clean with very cold water.汉江很凉和清
We can see fishes swimming in the river.我们能看见很多鱼在河里
In the evening,many people dance at Zhongshan park.在晚上,很多人在中山公园跳舞 Yujinxincheng is the highest building in Laohekou.玉锦新城是老河口最高的楼
Laohekou has Baihuashan (or Mountain Baihua),Lihuahu (or Lake Lihua) and Erpishan (or Mountain Erpi).老河口有百花山,梨花湖和二皮山
These places are beautiful.他们很美
Daxiantao (or Daxin peach) and Hanshuili (Hansgui peer) are products of Laohekou.大仙桃和汉水梨产自老河口
They are all tasty.他们很美味
Laohekou is our hometown.老河口是我们的家乡
I love Laohekou very much.我非常爱老河口

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