The English Corner in Zhongshan Park is where people 1.go to practise their speaking Engli

The English Corner in Zhongshan Park is where people 1.
go to practise their speaking English. Every Sunday afternoon 2.
they gather around, talk to each other in English. Among 3.
they are students, teachers, doctors, and so on. I first went to an 4.
English Corner when I was in Junior Grade Two. I went there on 5.
every Sunday and chat with some people in English. In the 6.
past three years I had never been absent. I’m sure I’ve made 7.
some progresses in my listening and speaking. And I have 8.
made many friends there. The English Comer is really good 9.
place. I hope that more friends will join in us. 10. 1. 此行无错。

(答案→)1. 此行无错。 解析：1. 此行无错。2. 把 speaking 改为 spoken。“英语口语”是 spoken English。3. 把 talk 改为 talking。用现在分词作伴随状语。4. 把 they 改为 them。人称代词作介词 among 的宾语，因此要用宾格。这是个倒装句，among them 是表语，主语是students, teachers…。5. 去掉 on。在every Sunday /week/ day 之类的时间状语前，不用介词。6. 把 chat 改为 chatted。chatted 与 went 并列，指最初去英语角的情况。7. 把had改为have。因为in the past/last few years常与现在完成时连用。8. 把progresses改为progress。因为 progress 是不可数名词，没有复数形式。9. 在is后加上a。后面的place是单数可数名词。10. 去掉join后面的in。join in是指参加某项活动(即以表示活动的名词用其宾语)；表示加入到某个组织并成为其中的一员，或与某人一起，要用join。

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