求英语高手写一篇手工作文.格式同四级

求英语高手写一篇手工作文.格式同四级
On Excessive Packaging
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议

In recent years,the excessive use of packages has become quite a serious problem in China.As for the reasons of excessively packaging,there are many factors contributing to it.
It is conceivable that the excessive packaging has mainly arisen from the two following factors.For one thing,people in mounting numbers are inclined to send a variety of gifts to their relatives and friends,especially during the holidays,and decorated gifts sometimes are a symbol of good taste.For another,the dealers are in the purpose of making more money by packaging the products to the largest extent.
Taking all the above-mentioned factors into consideration,it is quite urgent for us to take effective measures to cope with it.We consumers should basically concentrate more on the quality of the commodities rather than the packages; meanwhile,the government should also put restrictions on the excessive packaging.Only in this way can we guarantee the harmonious development of the market as well as ourselves.