提示:现在电脑被广泛使用,因特网越来越受欢迎。但学生和老师及父母之间对此看法不一样。请根据以下要点,写一篇短文,并表达自己的观点。
学生的观点
可以上网聊天,交朋友和购物;
可以打游戏,听音乐使自己放松;
可以学到很多知识。
老师家长的观点
网上交友不安全;
浪费时间,影响学习。
我的观点
很有用,可以查资料、画画、收发邮件、看电影等。
不要沉迷于游戏和聊天而影响学习。
注意:1. 词数70左右;短文开头已写好,不计入总词数;
2. 短文必须包含所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺。
Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular.
Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular.The students think they can chat on line,make friends and shop on computer,they can play computer games and listen to music.Using computer they could learn more knownledge.But their parents don’t agree with them.They think it’s not safe to make friends online and using computer can waste time,and it’ bad for their studies.But I think using computer is helpful.We can find out messages,draw,send and receive e-mailsd and see the films and so on.But we can’t always play computer games or it will influence our study.
提示:现在电脑被广泛使用,因特网越来越受欢迎。但学生和老师及父母之间对此看法不一样。请根据以下要点,写一篇短文,并表达自己的观点。学生的观点可以上网聊天,交朋友和购物;可以打游戏,
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- 提问者网友:骨子里的高雅
- 2021-01-02 21:33
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- 五星知识达人网友:往事埋风中
- 2021-01-22 07:01
(答案→)Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular.The students think they can chat on line,make friends and shop on computer,they can play computer games and listen to music.Using computer they could learn more knownledge.But their parents don’t agree with them.They think it’s not safe to make friends online and using computer can waste time,and it’ bad for their studies.But I think using computer is helpful.We can find out messages,draw,send and receive e-mailsd and see the films and so on.But we can’t always play computer games or it will influence our study. 解析:这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少.如: play computer games 玩电脑游戏;agree with 同意某人的意见;make friends 交朋友;it’ bad for their studies 对他们的学习不利;it’s not safe to make friends online 网上交友是不安全的等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
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- 1楼网友:低音帝王
- 2021-01-22 08:28
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