本人英语基础比较差,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?3公共场所吸烟现象

本人英语基础比较差,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?3公共场所吸烟现象

公共场所吸烟现象曾随处可见.由此带来的问题.禁止在公共场所吸烟的意义.Most Chinese men smoke,no matter what they are doing,such as working,chatting or waitting.Now most people have realized the badness of smoking,and some of them have given it up,but we could still see some people smoking in public places.Smoking in public places can cause a series of problems.Firstly,it makes people around you feel bored.Secondly,smoking in public places makes the environment worse.In order not to affect others or pollute the environment ,you had better not smoke in public places.What is the meaning of banning smoking in public places?In my view,firstly,this is an effective way to reduce the number of people who smoke.Secondly,it can keep others from being affected.Thirdly,it can protect the environment from being polluted.So I agree to ban smoking in public places.======以下答案可供参考======供参考答案1:14分

和我的回答一样，看来我也对了