求大神修改英语作文Dear Mary.I‘m sorry to heard your mother is ill.Las

求大神修改英语作文
Dear Mary.
I‘m sorry to heard your mother is ill.Last Sunday,I went hiking with my friends.At 7：00 in the morning we met at school gate.We brought a few bottles of water and some foods.We went to Wenfeng park and then we climbed the hill.On the top of the hill we could see how beautiful in my city.
How about you in these day?
Yours,
Lida

Dear Mary,
I‘m sorry to hear your mother is ill.Last Sunday I went hiking with myfriends.We met at school gate at 7：00 in the morning and took several bottles ofwater and some food in the bags.We went to the Wenfeng Park then and climbed thehill there.On the top of the hill we enjoyed the wonderful panorama of our city.
Please send my regards to your mother.
Yours,
Lida