我的英语作文写得如何（我六年级水平）

我的英语作文写得如何（我六年级水平）
My Summer Holiday
I hadan amusing holiday.
I have plenty of time to do manymeaningful things.But I spent most of my holidays studying English and math,for I want to improve my English andmath skill.So I went to the Rainbow Training Centre.
Firstly,I went to the Englishclass.There are many English teachers in the center.It is so kind of them tohelp me.I like them very much.One of the teachers is Mr.Goo.Mr.Goo wears a pair of glasses,a T-shirt and a pair of shorts.He spoke very well in the class.I had a deepimpression with him.But it was a pity that another teacher took his place to teach us.
Luckily,I took my English homework to Mr.Goo and he perfectedmy English knowledge.Since then,I asked him some English questions everydayand we became good friends.I think he is the best teacher in the bottom of myheart.
In thelast 7 days of the vocation,He teaches me math at my home every day.Thanks tohis hard work and I feel better in my math now.
Nopains,no gains.After trying my best,I had learnt how to fresh my English andmath skill.

恩恩很好的~句子都很通顺 写的也很长诶.只有一些小错误

你的时态不稳定...应该都是过去式 但是有的 你用了现在是.

比如 I have plenty of time...应该是 had

另外 应该是 deep impression of him 或者 he gave me a deep impression

倒数第二段 应该是 vacation 吧 是打错了咩 哈哈

然后同样的 应该是 He taught me maths

Thanks to his hard work,i feel better with maths now.

这样更好,两者是因果关系 不应该用 and 连接

恩其他的都没什么问题了~下次一定要注意时态哦.看出来你是个很努力的学生~ 加油!天天向上~

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再问： Thanks a lot.After I will study English harder .
再答： Good luck！