几句英语病句求修改外教从我的作文里找出有很多语法错误的句子,但我不知道该怎么改.括号内的是错的地方.求教.1.There

几句英语病句求修改
外教从我的作文里找出有很多语法错误的句子,但我不知道该怎么改.括号内的是错的地方.求教.
1.The
real happiness （is） not depend on how much money we （own） or how powerful we are,
it just （depend） on whether we have a positive mind.
2.（Be
a richest man is meaningless）
3.（It just because when he was struggling for his aim,he had a positive mind,so
he got happiness.）
4.（Compare
with himself nowadays,）
5.I
（always didn’t） turn to my teacher for help when I met mathematical difficulties
6.I
think independent mean（to confidence and adamancy）.

does; have; depends
Being the
it is just because he was struggling for his aim and had a positive mind that he got happiness.
Compared
usedn't to
having confidence and adamancy
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再问： 请问第5句和第6句我为什么错?
再答： 5. 表过去的习惯时，往往借助于短语used to do sth.
6. mean 译为“意味着” 时， 其用法是： mean doing sth.

对英语的表述应追求语言使用地道，真实，符合英美国家的表达习惯。
你会进步的！