初三的英语书面表达。。

很多人都希望能在事业上有所成就，但不是所有人都能取得胜利。成功需要顽强的意志，锲而不舍的努力，勤奋的精神。请你以此话为主要内容。写一篇50词左右的简短发言。

Many people want to succeed in business，but not everyone can make it。

I think being successful needs a very determined will and needs to keep trying it and a diligent mind。

That‘s my opinion。

Thank you！

望对Lz有所启发。