语法检查 ！！

When I was young, I always like to go to a cake shop, this cake shop was not like others, it was magical.
When I first stepping into the shop, I was surprised by all the things in that shop, couldn't stop looking around. Beautiful painting of things like fruits hanging on the wall. Fancy tables with golden tablecloths, fancy chairs with little crystals on them. The shop was all about gold. Each table all had candles stand on them, the candle light made the shop more gorgeously. Red carpet on the floor, crystal chandelier hanging from the ceiling. A vase with lovely roses in the corner and a table with all kinds of jam in the centre. Well, the mostly wonderful thing in that shop was the cakes. The cakes in a glass-frame was colourful. Cherry red, peach yellow, lemon green, dark black, magical purple, milky white, and so many colours I couldn't tell. The cakes were not only colourful, also tasty. There was so many flavor that you can choose. Banana, strawberry, apple, chocolate,vanilly and more. My favorite was watermelon with strawberry inside. It was so delicious. Not even that, the shape of cakes were cool. Some are star shaped, some are flower shaped, some are leaf shaped and some are heart shaped.
The lady of that cake shop were so friendly, she was old but she still enjoy life. She can make so many kinds of tasty cakes, just sit on the fancy chair, use the golden for and dish, and enjoy the soft music from an old-fashioned CD player. Feels so comfortable.
People loved to go there and stay at the cake shop for a long time. Just enjoy the sense of the cake shop. It was magical because everything there was amazing. I still can't stop thinking about the cake shop in my childhood.

When I was young, I always liked to go to a cake shop. This cake shop was not like others, it was magical.
When I first stepped into the shop, I was surprised by all the things in that shop, and couldn't stop looking around. Beautiful painting of things like fruits were hung on the wall. Fancy tables with golden tablecloths, and fancy chairs, had little crystals on them. The shop was all about gold. Each table had candles standing on them. The candle light made the shop more gorgeously. Red carpet was on the floor, and crystal chandelier was hung from the ceiling. A vase with lovely roses was in the corner and a table with all kinds of jam was in the centre. Well, the mostly wonderful thing in that shop was the cakes. The cakes in glass-frame were colourful. Cherry red, peach yellow, lemon green, dark black, magical purple, milky white, and so many colours that I couldn't tell. The cakes were not only colourful, but also tasty. There were so many flavors that you could choose. Banana, strawberry, apple, chocolate,vanilla and others. My favorite was watermelon with strawberry inside. It was so delicious. Not even that, the shape of the cakes were cool. Some were star shaped, some were flower shaped, some were leaf shaped and some were heart shaped.
The lady in that cake shop was so friendly. She was old but she still enjoyed life. She could make so many kinds of tasty cakes. You could just sit on the fancy chair, use the golden for and dish (不明白??) , and enjoy the soft music from an old-fashioned CD player. You would feel so comfortable.
People loved to go there and stay in the cake shop for a long time. They just enjoy the atmosphere of the cake shop. It was magical because everything there was amazing. I still can't stop thinking about the cake shop in my childhood.