看图，以My Room为题,写一篇10句话的短文。My Room This is my room. It is very nice. There are two pictures

看图，以My Room为题,写一篇10句话的短文。
My Room






This is my room. It is very nice. There are two pictures on the wall. Under them, there is a bed. And my bag is on the bed. Next to the bed is a desk. My computer and books are on the desk. There is a chair under the desk. There is a bookshelf next to the desk. There are many books in the bookshelf. There is also a sofa in the room. I often sit in the sofa to read books.

(答案→)This is my room. It is very nice. There are two pictures on the wall. Under them, there is a bed. And my bag is on the bed. Next to the bed is a desk. My computer and books are on the desk. There is a chair under the desk. There is a bookshelf next to the desk. There are many books in the bookshelf. There is also a sofa in the room. I often sit in the sofa to read books. 解析：这是一篇看图作文。图片上是一个房间的布置。房间里东西比较多，写作时可按照一定的空间顺序来写。注意主谓一致，尤其是系动词be的用法，以及表示方位介词的正确使用。【亮点分析】这篇作文按照一定的空间顺序，将房间里的物品摆设描述清楚。文章用到了there be句型，系动词be的用法很准确，并且用到了很多方位介词，如on在上面, under在下面, next to在旁边, in在里面， 等等。

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