我的英语问题急急！！

I have a happy family. Do you want to know?Now,let me tell you.
There are four people in my family.They’re my father,my mother,my brother and I.My father is a teacher.He teaches English.He loves his student,and often play with them.The students all love him. My mother is a doctor.Because she thinks it’s a great job and doctors can save people’s lives.She’s very busy.She cooks meals and cleans the house every day.I think she is very tired.She likes watching TV.My brother is a student.She wants to be a singer,because he thinks it’s fun.He likes dancing.He can dance well.I’m a student,too.I want to be a actress.I think it’s interesting.I like listening to pop music and reading.
I love my family.I hope my family will be happy foever.
我有一个愉快的家庭。 您是否想要知道？现在，让我告诉您。
我的家一共有四个人。我的父亲、我的母亲、我的哥哥和我.我的父亲是老师。他教英语.他与那些的爱他的学生经常玩。所有学生都很爱他。 我的母亲是医生。由于她认为这是一个了不起的工作和医生可能拯救人们生命。非常繁忙的她，烹调饭食并且每天清洗房子。我认为她非常疲乏。她喜欢观看电视.我哥哥是学生。因为他认为这很有乐趣，所以他想要当歌手。他喜欢跳舞。他可以很好跳舞。我也是一个学生。我想要当女演员。我认为这很有趣。我喜欢听流行音乐和读书。
爱我家。我希望我家将是永远愉快的