初三英语作文！急求

宋强有许多业余爱好.如：打篮球，踢足球，跑步等。每天放学和周末，他总是很晚回家，这使得他的父母常常生他的气，因此他们不许他再做任何运动，你认为宋强父母的做法是否正确，请谈谈你的看法。词数80左右....

I think Song Qiang's patents was wrong.They should give their son a room to do something he want.Song Qiang likes playing basketball and soccer,He also likes running.Though he get home late after school and weekend.Teenerges should do more excises ,it's good for their health.And I don't think it's wrong.As a student,I don't think students should be not allowed to do any excise and only study.That's so foolish.We should be allowed to make our decisions and do our things.Of course,the things is not bad for us.

As a student. I think some movement is often very good. Because you can make the body to maintain a healthy condition. But should not be in late home and make the parents worry

楼上的还行，给改几个句子吧，Though he get home 中的get改成gets。

do more excises 的excises改成exercises或sports。

do any excise的excise还是那样改