My name is Liao De Zun! I am a boy! 11 years old this year, not tall, the result is good. Now in China NaMingOu guiyang, guizhou ShangYi elementary school! This year in grade six. In class because popularity is very good, have a lot of friends! And I also want to make a foreign friend! Next, I will introduce myself!
The extensive interest: I like to play basketball, watching TV, playing computer, chat... Basketball is one of my all! I often go to the playground and my partner went to play basketball! My character is changeable, sometimes humorous, sometimes very cold!
Of course, I love my country! China is a vast land! I want to let you know more that we Chinese! I also want to know some American thing! Let us together happily talking! Make a pen Pal!
麻烦帮忙检查一下！那里写错的帮我改一改！谢谢了！
朋友，你写的是典型的中国式英语，整篇文章几乎找不到完全正确的句子，很难改啊！
My name is Liao De Zun! I am a 11 years old boy, not tall and my study is good. Now i study in ShangYi elementary school,NanMing district Guiyang city,Guizhou Province,China. grade six this year.i am quite popular in the class and thus i have a lot of friends! And I also want to make a foreign friend too! Next, I will introduce myself!
My interest: I like to play basketball, watching TV, playing computer, chat... (Basketball is the most)
I went to play basketball with my parents very often! However my character is changeable, sometimes humorous, sometimes very cold!
Of course, I love my country! China is a vast land! I want to let you know more we Chinese! I also want to know some American culture! Let us be pen pal and have a nice conversation
我也是贵阳的 呵呵