谁帮我写一份英文情诗ilovexiefanglei

楼主看看我刚写的~
I need you so much , baby
like the fish needs the ocean so much
oh,how much I hurt for you forget me , honey
via five hundred times turning round my head preexistence
expecting to meet you again this life
x-ray photo of my chest shows a rib missing
indicates the incomplete of my life
every night I just cannot fall asleep
for the hurt keeps torturing me throughout the whole night
again and again it reminds me dramatically
no longer be an incomplete person
go and get your rib back to your body
loving you always sweetie,so naturally ,so definitely
end of my preexistence I ask the god to make Eve accompany me
it is you the missing rib which Eve made from,remember me now,Honey?
楼主是类似唐伯虎的“我为秋香”吧,你想把每一句前大写也成,我写的,题材是来自于“夏娃是亚当的肋骨”这个传说,大概翻译一下~
我是那么的需要你,宝贝
就像鱼儿是那么的需要大海
你把我忘了 我是多么心痛啊 亲爱的
我用前生的五百次回眸
盼望今生能再度与你相遇
我的胸透照片显示我不见了一根肋骨
暗示着我人生的不完整
每晚我都辗转难眠
因为疼痛彻夜的折磨着我
它一次有一次的尖锐的提醒着我
再也不能做一个不完整的人了
我一直爱着你 甜心,那么自然,那么绝对,
在我前生最后的日子里,我乞求上帝做一个夏娃来陪伴我
而你就是我不见了的那根变成夏娃的肋骨,亲爱的现在你记得我了吗?
楼主看看怎么样~

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