关于一个审稿意见

However, there are several bright ideas in this paper. I attached below a completely modified and corrected version of the article. My only demand (claim) is to write a suitable Acknowledgment in the published paper (as the acknowledgment in the paper attached).
这个审稿人是认识的人, 帮我大改了论文, 甚至帮我写了一个版本, 感觉很纠结啊, 他算是帮过我的老前辈了, 是外国人......他的最后一句评论该怎么回答啊. 在 acknowledgement 里怎么写? 例如:
The author is thankful to the anonymous referee for him valuable comments and improvements.
就够了么? 我也没想到会找到那个人审, 好久没联系他了, 很囧啊...

从最后一句评语上来看，审稿人似乎wanted more than a thankful note in the acknowledgement.
尽管你认识审稿人，你在acknowledgement也不能指名道姓地感谢他。我建议你这么写：The author is grateful to the reviewers for their valuable comments and the author is especially thankful to reviewer A/B for his invaluable suggestions based upon which the paper has been revised.

一个审稿人三天就返回意见，是不是凶多吉少？ 21mar14 24mar14 review request to referee; report received 17mar14 correspondence (miscellaneous) sent to author 17mar14 right to publish signature received 14mar14 14mar14 review request to referee; message received (not a report) 14mar14 correspondence (miscellaneous) sent to author 14mar14 review request to referee; response not yet received 10mar14 acknowledgment sent to author 03mar14 correspondence (miscellaneous) sent to author