英语改错。When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties.The main pr...

英语改错。When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties.The main pr...

I ran into many difficulties.
The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese.
My teacher advised me to keep writing diaries.
I adopted her advice.
Happily it worked.
Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.
One day I wrote a short story and showed it to my teacher.
She liked it very much and she read it to the class.Everyone said the story was good .
I was great encouraged by their words.

第一个learned改成ing

1.The main problem was in (去掉in）
2.Soon I began to enjoy talk （talk改为talking动名词）
3.to express me in simple （me改为myself）
4.showed it my teacher（my前加to）
5.She liked it very much that （very much改为so much+that）
6.I was great encouraged （great改为greatly）

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run改为ran,
in that I always thought 中in去掉，
enjoy talk改为enjoy talking,
express me 改为express myself,
show it to my teacher,加to,
very much that she read 改为，very much so that,
great 应改换成一个副词形式。