修改,homeless people in the world,because of war earthquake、 i

修改,homeless people in the world,because of war earthquake、 illness and so on reason.so
homeless people
in the world,because of war earthquake、 illness and so on reason.so there are so many homeless people.they have no food and water ,They can't get enough money to goTo good education,they can not get medical treatment ……we should help them ,such as :I have ever gave my all Pocket money to them ; if we not only do not help them but also look down them.in order to life ,maybe they will steal money of other people;maybe they will Grab other people ,even kill other people;maybe the war will come to our Around,then the new homeless people appear,the war also appear,homeless people will come……
oh!dear friend,help homeless people!in fact it also help Yourself!it can bring Bright!it also can bring peace!

（There are many ）homeless people in the world,because of war earthquake、 illness and so on . . there are so many homeless people.they have no food and water ,They can't get enough money to（ have a good） education,they can not get medical treatment ……we should help them ,such as （giving ）my all （pocket） money to them ; if we not only not help them but also look down them., maybe they will steal money of other people;maybe they will grab other people ,even kill other people;Maybe the war will come to our Around,then the new homeless people （will） appear,the war also （will） appear,homeless people will come……
oh!dear friend,help homeless people!in fact it also help Yourself!it can bring bright!it also can bring peace!
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