求my dream home文,谢谢!

求my dream home文,大约初一的水平吧.

要多少字？
你梦想中的家——指的是自己的家，还是世界这个大家？

My dream home is very big and clean. It has at least five floors and fifteen rooms. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a dining room and a bathroom. There are no other rooms on the ground floor. My bedroom, study, bathroom are on the first floor. They are all very comfortable. My parents’ room is on the second floor. It’s also very big and clean. My grandparents live with us in this big house, too. Their rooms are on the third floor. On the fourth floor, there is a big balcony. I can play games, read books and chat with friends there.
I also have a big and nice garden. It is beside the big house. There are many flowers and vegetables in it. It has a big tree. In summer, I can sit under the tree with my family. Behind the garden, there is a swimming pool. I can swim with my friends in summer. I think it is very comfortable to live in my dream home

my dream home is at the foot of a hill.there is a football fild in front of my house and a swimming poll besied it. my house is very large.it has three floors. there is a kitchen and a cinema on the ground floor.the kitchen is very big.the is always more than enough food there.the cimema has a huge tv set.i often invite my friends to watch films at the weekend. on the first floor there are 12 bedrooms.each room has a new computer and all the beds are comfortable.sometimes my friends like to come and stay with me. there are two big rooms on the second floor.my friends and i often have parties there.it is great fun! 我的梦想是在一个山脚有块空地,那里是一个足球场在我家门前和游泳池.我的家非常大.它有三层.有一个厨房和一个电影在地面floor.这厨房是很大.这总是有足够多的食物在这里,这看电影有一个巨大的电视.i经常邀请我的朋友去看电影在周末.在一楼有12个卧室.每个房间都有一台新的电脑和所有的床很舒服.有时我的朋友喜欢和我在一起.有两只大房二楼.我和我的朋友经常有人有.这是很大的乐趣! 希望能帮到你，望采纳，谢谢~