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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。The suitable clothes can make men handsome and make women att

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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
The suitable clothes can make men handsome and make women attractive, so more and more people spend much money on clothes.
Thanks to the fashion designers, many different styles of clothes appear every day. If you go to a big store or walk on the street, you'll find many fashionable clothes easily.
Of course everyone has his or her own way of dressing. Perhaps the most popular clothes are casual ones. They're made of cotton and there are many types of designs. They feel comfortable, so men and women as well as the young and the old enjoy wearing them. Some casual clothes don't need dry-cleaning, so they can save us money.
Not everyone can wear casual clothes at any time and any place. Some people have to wear uniforms when they're at work such as police officers, soldiers, firefighters and pilots. Uniforms can not only protect them but also show good discipline.
It doesn't matter what kinds of clothes you wear. It's important for everyone to dress neatly and suitable (合适地).
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容要点。
2.以约120个词就我们现实生活中衣着的话题谈你的想法,内容包括:
(1)你个人对待衣着重要性的理解;
(2)举例说明你对衣服潮流(fashion)的看法;
(3)你怎样看待身边部分同学对名牌服装的追求。
【写作要求】
1.可以使用实例来支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。This passage tells us that though people dress differently in everyday life, what matters most is that we should dress neatly and properly instead of caring too much about the quality and fashion.
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(答案→)This passage tells us that though people dress differently in everyday life, what matters most is that we should dress neatly and properly instead of caring too much about the quality and fashion. 解析:本文属于读写任务,考生首先要归纳短文大意,提炼出讨论的中心思想,然后再根据这一中心思想在做详细讨论。本文的话题是对生活中的衣着进行的说明,属于议论文,所以使用一般现在时的时态和第三人称,在发表个人观点的时候使用第一人称。要点:1.短文内容:虽然在生活中,我们天天都穿衣服,但是重要的是我们要穿着整洁恰当而不是奇装异服。2.对于衣着重要性的理解:要根据不同的场合穿着不同的服装,这是个人修养的表现。3.举例说明对衣服潮流的看法:有人总是在追时尚,但是显得不伦不类,穿衣服最重要的是得体。4.对于学生来说最重要的是学习成绩,而不是穿着。写作说明:本对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。【亮点说明】本文中高级句式的使用仍然是一个亮点,如:though people dress differently in everyday life, what matters most is that we should dress neatly and properly instead of caring too much about the quality and fashion句中的让步状语从句:though people dress differently in everyday life,主语从句what matters most。以及表语从句that we should dress neatly and properly instead of caring too much about the quality and fashion。以后的写作中要注意多使用高级句式。
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