托福口语TASK 1我把要说的,都打出来了.求批评指证.Describe a book that y

托福口语TASK 1我把要说的,都打出来了.求批评指证.Describe a book that y

帮你修改下,将无用的句子删去,背这个 版本,看看可否：In my opinion ,I would like to say the most useful book i read is the Chinese English Dictionary.Fisrt ,it‘s a convenient material to learn more new words and memorize them .What's more,whenever you come across new words,you could effectively consult them through a dictionary .Also,Chinese English Dictionary is fairly handy so that you could carry them all the time thus you can keep up learning at your free time.these are the reasons why i think that the Chinese English Dictionary is most useful.第二题：Personally speaking ,I would like to read magazines.There are three points why i do think so.First,i could learn a lot from magazines written by young editors.If you read them regularly,not only can you broaden your views ,but also update your brain.Secondly,articles in magazines are often accompanied with elegant pictures,making the reading process more comfortable and relaxing.Also,magazines are always divided into different subjects or types or styles .In other word,you can easily pick up what you want to read.======以下答案可供参考======供参考答案1:第二段：开头第一句可以缩减为Personally，I would like to read magazines for the following two reasons. Task 1只有45秒，眨眼就过去了，所以要少说套话，直入重点。并且三个reason有点多，时间不够，选两个理由，一个理由两句话搞定。加上开头的一句总共五句话，每句9秒说完。如果时间有剩，可以加个therefore，I prefer to read magazines 结尾这句可有可无。重点是两个reason第一段修改方法类似，把模板句子删掉，太罗嗦。直接Personally， xxxxx（重复题目）for the following 2 reasons。 Firstly，，，Secondly，，， Therefore，xxxxx＜把题目换一个说法＞

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