求一片英语作文题目是more pressure from study is good or bad

求一片英语作文题目是more pressure from study is good or bad

With more and more social problems appear directly to the students,study could become harder and opressing.Regardless of the bad effects set by our parents and their heavy hopes,we could still see many other bad effects that pressures set on the students.More and more kids feel like escaping from school because they're scared with the terrible face and words they may face with just if they do not do well in their exams.As you could see,the more pressure just lead to more dislikes to the study.Moreover,some students are even becoming self-abased because they are facing too many excellent students and they could not have the chance to win the competing!But it doesn't mean there is no good sides of the pressure will do to the study.As is known to all,people will just accelebrate the pace of being greater.It's hard to decide but I still leanning to believe that more and more pressure will only burden the students down someday...写完了.终于.是不够么?还要么?要的话我就再加一些吧.不过好像够字数了.

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