英语过去式短文

上周你去北京旅游，玩的很开心。你去了鸟巢 公园 动物园和商场，看见许多有趣的东西。并且还给朋友们买了许多的礼物请以 “A Nice Trip” 为题写一篇60字的英语短文

I went to Beijing with my parents for vacation last weekend. I went to Beijing National Stadium, it was huge and spectacular. Then we went to a park near it, my mother bought me an ice cream, I really liked it. The next day, my parents brought me to he zoo, it had lots of animals that I can't even name them, and a lot of people of course. After dinner, we went straight to the super market and bought lots of presents for my friends, they loved it. It was a truly nice trip, I'll never forget it!献丑了！

last summer holiday,my family had gone to hongkong ,at the morning ,my father drive the car to shenzhen,after the lunch,we take the car to hongkong,hongkong is a center of fanancial.there are many people in there,we just go shopping ,then ,we had a good dinner. the next day ,we gone to the ocean park,it was very intersting and wonderful.the good expression was the informce of the dophin,they could save people,also could show many things.they are very smart! i like hongkong very much