两款软件我都用过, 大家帮我看看改后在serach engine 眼里算不算原创, 还有哪一种改写更好些,从原创力度, 通顺的等综合角度来说.
这个是原文 :
I’m thinking about purchasing some of those 6 inch Lucite stripper heels for some of my outfits. I’m thinking about purchasing 2 pair of those clear stripper heels one so i could try wearing them with my long jeans as i’ve seen a lot of other girls trying the look and the other pair to wear underneath my prom dress this year. Since the heels are clear they will make look like Cinderella and it will give me a much better height in my prom dress because I’m really short I’m only 5″3
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这个是软件A改写后的结果
I’m meditative about purchasing the little of those 6 in. Lucite stripper heels for the little of my outfits. I’m meditative about purchasing 2 span of those transparent stripper heels the single so i could try wearing them with my prolonged jeans as i’ve seen the lot of alternative girls perplexing the demeanour as well as the alternative span to wear underneath my promenade skirt this year. Since the heels have been transparent they will have demeanour similar to Cinderella as well as it will give me the most improved tallness in my promenade skirt since I’m unequivocally reduced I’m usually 5″3
原文共80个单词,改写替换了34个.
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下面这个是软件B改写的结果
I’m intellection most purchase whatever of those 6 progress Perspex worker heels for whatever of my outfits. I’m intellection most purchase 2 unify of those country worker heels digit so i could essay act them with my daylong jeans as i’ve seen a aggregation of another girls disagreeable the countenance and the another unify to coiffe underneath my ball coiffe this year. Since the heels are country they module attain countenance same character and it module provide me a such meliorate peak in my ball coiffe because I’m rattling brief I’m exclusive 5″3
共改写了40个单词.
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自我感觉B改写的原创化要高些, 不过好像A比较通顺些, 大家帮我看看,我英文不是很好,B改写的是不是没法看啊 呵呵