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1 我在北京居住，极端天气较少见，今年的雪比往年大，压断树枝，在06年经历了沙尘暴。

2 沙尘暴过大，污染空气，不容易看清道路，上学艰难。

3 我认为受到了气候的影响，因为沙尘暴，我无法在外面行走。

4 应该由发达国家贡献最大的力，其次发展中国家。各国应采取一定的措施。

I lived in Beijing, extreme weathers happen not very often. It snowed heavier than last year and in year 2006, came a sandstorm.

The sandstorm was so big that it’s very difficult to go to school. The air was polluted and the visibility of the road was very bad.

Because of the sandstorm, I have to stay at home.

Every country should try their best to heal the world. Developed countries should give financial and technological assistance to the developing countries.

首先申明一下，你这几个句子没连接词，不顺畅，以下是我的翻译，仅供参考。

1. I live in Beijing city, hardly any extreme weather can meet, but we have heavy snow that can snap off the branches of the tree, in addition, we had gone through the sand storm in 2006.

2. The dust storm is so strong that contaminates the air, also make it hard to see the road clearly even go to school.

3. I consider I have influenced by the dust storm, because of it , I can not walk in the outside world.

4. I think the developed countries need to try their best to solve this problem, secondly is the developing nations, after all, every country has to take certain measures.

1.I lived in Beijing, extreme weather is less common than usual this year's snow big, pressure-off branches, in 2006 experienced a sandstorm

2.Sandstorm is too large, polluted air, is not easy to see the road, going to school difficult.

3.I think the climate has been affected, so sandstorms, I cannot walk outside

4.I think Should be the greatest contribution by the developed countries force, followed by the developing countries. States should take certain measures.