英语作文（中英互译）,写给朋友关于你的旅途.中国国内.

While writing your travel stories,don’t write it without breaks.Break it into paragraphs.Use images to show what you saw and help readers feel what you felt.While images help you share what you saw,the combinations of many factors will not reveal itself in the photograph – the lighting,the sight combined with sounds,the wind and the smells around – this is where your description of the sensations and feelings that you went through in your experience will help your readers understand and live the experience through you.
写旅途杂记的时候,不要“马不停蹄”,应采用多段的形式.借助图片展示你的视界,并帮助读者体会你的感受.旅途见闻是一个多元素的综合体,尽管图片能帮你分享你的所见,却不能将你的全部体验展现：闪电、声画合一的景象、风以及周围的气味——你在旅途中经历的这些感觉和感受有助于你的读者体会,并通过你得到身临其境的感觉.你要将这些感受描述下来.