语法对,可以简洁2011年9月30日21：00——2011年10月8日6:00进行地下地坪漆铺工作,期间地下二、三层所有

语法对,可以简洁
2011年9月30日21：00——2011年10月8日6:00进行地下地坪漆铺工作,期间地下二、三层所有固定车位不能停放车辆,地下三层立体车位及地下四层车位的车辆不能移动.大厦地下车库出入口将予以封闭,持有大厦停车证的车辆将被安放在地上停车位暂时停放.

From 21:00 on Sept 30 to 6:00 on Oct 8,2011,due to renovation work on the ground floor,there will be rearrangement of using the underground carpark in this building.No vehicles will be allowed to be parked at parking lots on underground level 2 and 3.Vehicles parked on underground level 3 and 4 at the time of the commencement of the renovation works will remain stationary for the entire renovation period.The entrance of the underground parking will be closed and no vehicle will be able to get in and out of the underground parking lot.Temporary parking space will be provided on the ground level parking lot for vehicles with parking license at this building.