假设父亲节即将来临，请你借此机会给你父亲写封信，和他谈谈心里话。要点： 1.父亲辛勤工作，让我受到更

假设父亲节即将来临，请你借此机会给你父亲写封信，和他谈谈心里话。要点： 1.父亲辛勤工作，让我受到更好的教育，过上好的生活。2.父亲对我学习严格要求，但在我考试失利时，又经常鼓励我不要放弃。3.表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。要求：短文内容应包括所含提示要点，不要逐字逐句翻译，可适当发挥，语言流畅。短文字数90字左右，短文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实人名、校名、地址等。 Dear father, Yours,Li Hua

Dear father,
Father’s Day is coming. I want to say thank you on this special day.
You are the man that I admire most in this world but I don’t know how to express my thanks most of the time.
I want to thank you for working so hard. Because of your great effort, our family lead a happy life and I receive better education. I understand that you are strict with me in my study because you want me to be better than before. I appreciate your kind encouragement when I failed in my exams.
I wish you could always be healthy and happy. I will try my best to be a man that you have always wished.
Yours,
Li Hua



试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，所给提纲要点清晰，要求明确，话题内容贴近学生生活实际。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了一些的固定句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

father’s day is coming. i'd like to say something to you.     you always work hard so that i can receive a better education and live a better life. you are strict  with me in my study and help me with my homework. when i failed an exam, you encouraged me to  be confident and keep trying. when i had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at  life.     you have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. thank you for your deep love.  thank you for all that you have done for me. i love you! i hope you will be healthy and happy forever! happy fathers day!