Hi ! My name is Jackie Chen. I am 13 years old. I am in Class2，Gread 7. I like my Eenglish

Hi ! My name is Jackie Chen. I am 13 years old. I am in Class2，Gread 7. I like my Eenglish

13岁写这么好的英文作文，很了不起，尤其是because 用的很好。

有2个错误
interested，应该是interesting

play the piano 应该是 play piano

还有几个单词 ，可能是你打字的时候打错了，如下：
Grade
English
dance

其他都很nice.

interested改为interesting

fun改为funny

because it's fun and easy . I can clance,sing and play the piano. 这句中fun变funny,clance是错词，为dance,Eenglish为English,because she is interested这句不完整 interested in...是一个词组对什么感兴趣，interest变interesting，

she is interested应该是interesting
because it's fun and easy 应该是funny

= =总的来说就是词性的问题