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帮忙看一下这篇英语作文的错误,谢谢了!(用初二的知识解答)

at should we do to keep healthy?

If you want to keep you healthy,you should wash your hands before the meal.And you and I must drink plenty of boiled water.We should eat lots of fresh fruit and vegetable,and less meat.Of couse,doing more exercise is a good way to keep us healthy,because it can make us stronger.We mustn’t stay up late.Becauae it cancause you have a headache.We had better keep the air fresh,it can make you fell well.

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at should we do to keep healthy?


If you want to keep you healthy,you should wash your hands before the meal.And you and I must drink plenty of boiled water.We should eat lots of fresh fruit and vegetable,and less meat.Of couse,doing more exercise is a good way to keep us healthy,because it can make us stronger.We mustn’t stay up late.Becauae it cancause you have a headache.We had better keep the air fresh,it can make you fell well.


总的来说写的不错的,只有些小地方用词改一下就更贴切了。


1. 例如开头: what should we do to keep healthy? 最好改为“How do we keep healthy?”


2.you should wash your hands before the meal。 可以不改“meals” 。你的用法是对的,这里是特指。


3.We should eat lots of fresh fruit and vegetables。“fruit ”要变为复数,


4.And you and I must drink plenty of boiled water。 “And you and I” 最好还是用你原来的代词“you”,保持与前面代词一致。即:you must drink plenty of boiled water。


5..We should eat lots of fresh fruit and vegetable,and less meat。 最好用“but”,能强调出少吃肉,多吃蔬菜的意思。


6..We mustn’t stay up late。 最好用“shouldn't get up ”。 mustn’t 有中式英语的味道。


7.Becauae it can cause you have a headache。 你这里有两个动词了。所以“Becauae it cause a headache。”就ok了。


8.We had better keep the air fresh。最好是 we'd better keep the favorable environment with fresh air.


应为原文是能感觉出来时按照中文表达方式来描写了,


重新整理后的作文如下。考虑到文章结构,给你增加了点连接词,但基本保留你自己的风格。给你参考下。


how we do to keep healthy?


If you want to keep healthy,at first,you should wash your hands before the meal. secondly ,it is necessary to drink plenty of boiled water. thirdly ,you should eat lots of fresh fruits and vegetables but more meat. Of couse,doing more exercise is a good way to keep us healthy,because it makes us stronger.We should't get up late.Because it causes a headache.besides,We’d better have favorable environment with fresh air,it can make us fell well.

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at should we do to keep healthy?应该是What should we do to keep healthy

you should wash your hands before the meal.before the meal须改成before meals

We should eat lots of fresh fruit and vegetables.fruit须改成fruits

Becauae it can cause you have a headache.须改成Because it can cause you to have...或make you have...

it can make you fell well.应该是because it can make you feel well.

at should we do to keep healthy?

If you want to keep your healthy,you should wash your hands before the meal.And you and I must drink plenty of boiled water.We should eat lots of fresh fruit and vegetables,and less meat.Of couse,doing more exercise is a good way to keep us healthy,because it can make us stronger.We mustn't get up late.Becauae it can cause you have a headache.We had better keep the air fresh,it can make you fell well.

只有几处吧?我也是初二的,可能有些地方我不会所以就没改

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