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假如你是阳光中学的一名初三学生Simon,你要写封信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend,告诉他你的烦恼,并请求帮助。请根据下列表格中所列的信息,完成一封信。个人信息1998年

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假如你是阳光中学的一名初三学生Simon,你要写封信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend,告诉他你的烦恼,并请求帮助。请根据下列表格中所列的信息,完成一封信。
个人信息
1998年9月10日出生;校足球队成员,喜欢踢足球;最喜欢红色,因为……
性格特点
勤奋,谦虚;有时多虑;注意细节;自信(举一例)……
烦恼
作业多,经常熬夜,睡眠不足,上课疲劳;父母不许我在外面踢球到很晚;他们只关心考试分数,没注意到我的进步,我已经尽力……
愿望
希望得到有价值的建议。
要求:1. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯。
2. 要点必须包括表格中的所有信息,可以适当发挥。
3. 词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sigmund Friend,
My name is Simon. I’m a Grade 9 student in Sunshine Middle School.

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What should I do? Can you help me? I’m looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes!
Simon.
One possible version:
Dear Sigmund Friend,
My name is Simon. I’m a Grade 9 student in Sunshine Middle School. I was born on September 10th, 1998. My favourite sport is football and I’m a member of the school football team. I like red best because red is the colour of heat and represents power and strong feelings. Wearing red can make it easier for me to take action.
I’m hard-working and modest. I worry too much at times. I always pay attention to details. I’m confident and I’m never afraid of making a speech to a large group of people.
Now I have too much homework every day. I often stay up late to complete the exercises. I don’t get enough sleep and I feel tired in class, My parents don’t allow me to stay out late to play football. They care only about marks after exams. They don’t see my progress, but I have tried my best to do it well.
Can you please offer me some valuable suggestions?
What should I do? Can you help me? I’m looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes!
Simon.
最佳答案
(答案→)One possible version:Dear Sigmund Friend, My name is Simon. I’m a Grade 9 student in Sunshine Middle School. I was born on September 10th, 1998. My favourite sport is football and I’m a member of the school football team. I like red best because red is the colour of heat and represents power and strong feelings. Wearing red can make it easier for me to take action. I’m hard-working and modest. I worry too much at times. I always pay attention to details. I’m confident and I’m never afraid of making a speech to a large group of people.Now I have too much homework every day. I often stay up late to complete the exercises. I don’t get enough sleep and I feel tired in class, My parents don’t allow me to stay out late to play football. They care only about marks after exams. They don’t see my progress, but I have tried my best to do it well.Can you please offer me some valuable suggestions?What should I do? Can you help me? I’m looking forward to hearing from you!Best wishes!Simon. 解析:本文是篇材料作文,材料简单。考生在写作之前必须认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,要求写自己的性格和烦恼、愿望。应该用一般现在时。人称用第一人称。注意仔细阅读表格,分析英语的正确表达和句子之间的衔接。【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点,语句通顺,标点符号运用正确。还运用了favourite,pay attention to , be afraid of, too much homework, feel tired , allow … to …, because引导的原因状语从句、动名词作主语,等等。并注意了句子开头的变化和的衔接如:Now, but等等。
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