初中英语作文改错！急！

In the afternoon,we often do something to relax ourselves.Boys like doing some sports and they often play basketball,sometimes they play table tennis. Girls like visiting their friends and going shopping with them , In the evening,we are reading our favourite books .On Sunday morning,I often climb mountains with my best friends .We like climing very much. On Sunday evening ,I sometimes play computer games with my friends. These are our weekend activities .I feel relaxed on weekends and we always have a good time at weekends .

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1. In the evening,we are reading our favourite books .On Sunday morning,I often climb mountains with my best friends 改为In the evening,we read our favourite books .
2. I feel relaxed on weekends and we always have  a good time at weekends .改为I feel relaxed  and we always have  a good time  on weekends .

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1）less->fewer

2）去掉more，或者改成much

3）forgot 后面加doing

4）that改成it

5）ask后面缺少间接宾语（加上you）

6）was reading

7）will改为would

8）去掉do

9）won't改为doesn't（主将从现，条件句）

sometimes 首字母大写 Girls like visiting their friends and going shopping with them and改为to

In the afternoon,we often do something to relax ourselves.Boys like doing some sports and they often play basketball, and sometimes they play table tennis. 连词必须有 Girls like visiting their friends and going shopping with them, and in the evening, we are reading our favourite books. 连词必须有

The senior high school entrance examination is coming. In order to make a success in the exam, I think that it’s high time for us to relax for a while. Or we’ll be too nervous to work well . 　　In order to relax ourselves, we can turn to our hobbies. Different students have different ideas --- Some watch TV, some listen to music… But for me I enjoy taking exercise most.No matter how tired I feel, I always spend an hour (in) walking or jogging in the park. Besides, I also play table tennis with my friends after school. In my opinion, taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies. I think it’s really helpful to both my health and my study.