英语改错，英语好的进来。高中

One day Wang Hai is on his way to school when a truck carried boxes of goods passed by.Just then he saw a box fall from the truck, and the driver did not realized that. So Wang Hai Shouted to him. As the driver failed to hear,so Wang Hai ran after it shouting at the top of his voice.However,a truck ran so fast that his effort was in vain. How could he do next ? Suddenly he noticed the number in the truck and had an idea. At once he went to call the police and the driver came back for the lost boxes.

下面是我找到的错误，你可以参考一下，希望可以帮到你：首先，时态错误，is改为was，因为本文讲的是某一天的事，不可能出现一般现在时。and the driver…中and改为but，此处应为转折，而非并列。shouted to …中to改为at，向某人大喊，固定搭配。 effort改为efforts.因为他不只做了一件事。it后加with，表伴随。a truck中a改为the，此处为特指。 in the track 中in改为of，指这辆车的车牌号。boxes改为box，最后一个盒子，是单数。

把第一句的is改成was。第2行的把did改成has。第3行把to改成at。第4行把shouting改成to shout。第5行把in改成of。

1.将is改为was. 2.将passed改为passing.3.将to改为at.4.将it改为him.

5.将effort改为efforts.6.正确7.将boxes改为box.

望采纳。

因为文章用的过去式，所以、is改was.还有、想请问，错误共有多少？

One day Wang Hai is（was)  on his way to school when a
truck carried(carrying) boxes of goods passed by.Just then
he saw a box fall from the truck, and(but) the driver did
not realized(realize) that. So Wang Hai Shouted(shouted) to him.
As the driver failed to hear,so(去掉） Wang Hai ran after it
shouting at the top of his voice.However,a(the) truck
ran so fast that his effort was in vain.
How(What) could he do next ? Suddenly he noticed the number
in(of) the truck and had an idea. At once he went to call
the police and the driver came back for the lost boxes(box).