改错急!I have a pet goldfish,which name is Charlice .I got Char

改错急!I have a pet goldfish,which name is Charlice .I got Charlice in my fifteenth birthday andhe is the loveliest little thing I ever see.At first,my morther did not like an idea of keeping Charile in the house.So I had a long talk with her .Realize how fond I was of Charlie,she finally gave it in.Charlie is very big now .I came home school.Then I watch him for a while before I get down my homework.It is very relaxing to see him swimming in and out of the plant.

I have a pet goldfish,which name is Charlice .I got Charlice in 【on】my fifteenth birthday and he is【was】 the loveliest【改成 most lovely】 little thing I 【加 had】ever see【seen】.At first,my mother did not like an【the】 idea of keeping Charile in the house.So I had a long talk with her .Realize【Realizing】 how fond I was of Charlie,she finally gave it in.Charlie is very big now .I came【come】 home 【from】school.Then I watch him for a while before I get down 【加 to】my homework.It is very relaxing to see him swimming in and out of the plant.