请帮忙改文章,What is the best behavior in our life?The h

请帮忙改文章,What is the best behavior in our life?The h

Let me told you a really thing 【which 】had .I still remembered that 【it】was a summer vacation .======以下答案可供参考======供参考答案1:What is the best behavior in our life? The help and hope. Let me told you a really thing had happened with my own experience. I still remembered was a summer vacation when I got on a long distance bus (limousine) to home, Tianjing, after overnight train transportation from Xi’an to Beijing. Suddenly, a started serious quarrel when the bus moved halfway. The girl with all her strength struggled with the boy. that time, some of passengers who nearby that couple began to scream, those people looked so horror, as the young boy stuck into that girl’s chest with dagger and leaped off bus running away after pulled out the dagger. It was so terror everywhere was blood. The girl still bled and sat there waiting somebody’s help. Gradually, cooled down, they started to help that girl stop the blood from a wound before the policeman spot after someone called the police. During that time, all the people reach out their to help the wounded with their own ways. 可能改的不是很全面,而且不一定全对,希望自己可以好好思考一下.

和我的回答一样，看来我也对了