我一周以后考雅思，这是最后一次机会，必须到6.5，前2次 都是作文4.5 害的我 最后一个月 请问该如何准备，

10天突破什么的都看过……作文我觉得写的还不错啊……框架例子对比什么都有……基础薄弱不可能吧……新东方去过了……我就是觉得作文你们是怎么写的

楼主的总分不错，但是写作是个问题，等你以后出国了就会发现其实写作在国外是最重要的，因为听说的话随着时间会慢慢好起来

好了，废话不多说，我雅思作文7，就随便说说我的一点感触吧

1，语法错误一定好少，并且因为是学术性的写作，不要用i，you，之类的词

2，结构一定要清楚，不要想到哪写哪，一定要有明确的框架，保证各段的比重的合理性

3，模板不是不可以用，关键是要有自己的个性化模板，自己根据作文考题准备2-3个自己的模板是可以的

4，词语一定要多样性，不能写来写去就那么几个太child的词语，注意单词之间的互换

5，多用从句，不要整篇的简单句，但是注意，如果有些复杂的句子没有把握的话就不要用，得不偿失

（如果觉得好请给分，不好请指出，谢谢）

Some people think we should ban animal experiments. They argue that animals are friends of human beings. Some animals such as dogs accompany children and bring happiness to families. If animals are tested, they will be definitely hurt, even killed by experiments. It is so cruel for the lovely animals. Animals are so innocent that they should not be hurt. It is so selfish for people to carry out experiments on animals. （72words）
Others hold the opinion that animal experiments are necessary for the development of science. Without animal experiments, medicine won’t be allowed to apply to the human being for its danger. From the other side, the animal experiment is the best way to get data without hurting the human. We can take the advantage of the animals to test new drugs. (61words)

Every year, millions of animals undergo painful suffering or death as a result of scientific research into the effects of drugs, food additives, cosmetics and other chemical products. While most people think animal testing is necessary, others are upset by what they see as needless suffering. This essay looks at some of the positive and negative aspects of animal testing.Many medical treatments and procedures have been developed from experiments on animals. Since animals share many features with humans, scientists use animals to test the safety and effectiveness of newly developed drugs before pilot testing on small groups of patients. Medical teams practice new operating techniques such as transplants on animals. Without animal testing, many procedures or new drugs would be extremely unsafe.However, many people are concerned that animals are suffering unnecessarily and cruelly. They do not believe that every new drug needs to be tested on animals, especially with the huge database of knowledge and modern computer models. They also are worried that many animal tests are ineffective, pointing out that any drugs have had to be withdrawn from the market despite extensive testing. They particularly feel that animal testing should not be used for non-essential products such as cosmetics, shampoos, soaps, and cleaning products. Furthermore, some campaigners would like to see certain tests replaced and more humane methods used.We need to make sure that the millions of animals who are used for testing new products are treated with the minimum of suffering. Although some animal testing may be unavoidable at present, treating our fellow creatures as mercifully as possible will demonstrate our humanity.（ 267 words)

现代科技使生活更加便捷(Modern Technology Makes Life More Convenient)
Modern technology makes life more convenient; tools are the milestores of the technology as well as human being’ s progress.
Men used to cut trees with hand saw. But now, by using electronic saw they can cut down a tree in only a few minutes. Another example is more vivid: You have something urgent which has to be informed to your friend whose house is two hour’s ride away. You probably want to make a phone call. But no telephone is installed in your friend’ s home. What could you do? Nowadays, with modern technology advanting, using internet is popular with us. Some years ago, people had to get what they wanted through looking into a lot of information; at last people could become tired and spent too much time. Now, if you use Internet, all becomes a piece of cake. Only by clucking, you will gain what you expect.
We all hope that modern technology will reach a higher level, because modern technology makes life more convenient indeed.

现代科技使生活更加便捷
现代科技使生活更加便捷；工具是科技进步和人类进步的里程碑。人类过去用手锯锯树，但是现在，用电锯可在几分钟内锯倒一棵树。另外一个例子更加生动形象：如果你有急事通知你的朋友，而他家距你家有2小时的路程，你可能想打个电话。但是你的朋友家又没安电话，你该怎么办?如今，随着现代科技的进步，使用网络已很流行。若干年前，人们不得不查找大量资料来搜集需要的信息，最后人累得疲惫不堪，还浪费了大量时间。现在，如果使用网络，一切就都是小菜一碟了。只要轻敲键盘，就会有求必应。
我们都期待着现代科技能达到一个更高的水平，因为现代科技确实使生活变得更便捷。

推荐凉月的写作书，很管用，你只要按照那本书里的去做一定能到6分以上。

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将这几年的雅思考题全部看一遍，前20天每个题目都将你自己的构思写下来，将你想到的例子也写下来，每天3题，不要写全部，先把题目都熟悉了，到时候写作文时例子一下子就想到了，最后10天，每天写一篇文章，可以用之前20天的题目，完整地写下来，请个老师帮你批改

在雅思考试中，大多考生对雅思写作热情不高，把大量时间和精力花在阅读听力的练习上，从而到头来写作总的来说都没练过几次，以至于找不到写作文的一种节奏和感觉。到了考场上，必然会因为发挥不出真实的写作水平导致分数不理想。

找个高人来教你，但是这样的话，价格是昂贵的。。。如果楼主预算充足，就去培训机构里找吧，有高手的。。。如果是自己弄的话，可能就要下点功夫了，这真的不是那么容易的。。。买十天突破雅思写作吧，这书还是可以的，但是仅仅限制在大作文，一本新东方的套路解析与范例大全，这里面的小作文看，还有就是剑桥4-7的凡是给了满分范文的文章，也看。。。如果楼主觉得看了之后似乎效果不大，那你就背。。。虽然办法笨，但是很见效果，要有点恒心。。。每天背个2篇，坚持一个星期，效果就会显现出来，4.5的作文可能是基础比较薄弱，所以能把语法补补是最好的，不要弄的那么细，一些基本的，比如什么从句啊弄懂就行了 . 楼主这样说的话，可能是不是内容方面的问题，要不就是有些跑题了。。。还是小作文拉了你的分？个人觉得十天的小作文确实是不行。。。我的作文不是强项，看十天的大作文，小作文是新东方的套路解析与范例大全。。。平常自己练的比较多。。。作文6.5。。